Saturday, September 26, 2009

The Whisperer

Poetry that was expressed,
Insight addressed,
Read what was written,
Comment if befitting,
Gratitude is what I offer to thee,
Penned by yours truly.

I wrote this poem at the age of 12. Poetry has developed into my way of expression. From then onwards; though I had written poems prior to this; my love for poetry has grown gradually and magnificently. The incentive to write even more continued when this poem was published in a local Islamic youth magazine much to this happiness of a young girl.
Please do read and leave your comments.

The Whisperer

He who whispers in one's ear,
No one does he spare,
He tries to persuade and soothe one's mind,
But when he's finished you're left behind.

You will have to face your deeds alone,
He will not be there, for you have lent him a loan,
Now he your enemy sits on a throne,
Hence his work is to cause chaos and not to moan.

Today he will be your closest friend but tomorrow he will be your worst foe,
He is whom that cannot be ignored,
For his words to you are so implored.

He is afraid of only those who believe,
They are the ones who will strive and achieve,
He deceives, opposes and makes mockery,
For he knows only treachery.

He whispers into the hearts of mankind,
And demolishes the noor from their mind ,
Who is he?
We all know!
Don't we????????

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  1. oh my you were even talented when you were young ! Im not surprised :) This poem is very nice. Im most impressed with the well thought out structure. Its also nice to see how youve grown as a poet :)

    Once again, thank you for sharing this with us :)

  2. Thank you so much Cathy!
    Your words always bring a smile to my face and its a pleasure to have your support
    take care dear,
    my gratitude is yours!

  3. Bismillaah

    Assalaamu Alaikum!

    Lovely poems maa'sha Allaah. I am so impressed. Very sweet the first one. And the second one was outstanding.

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